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获奖作品选登 | 新哲英文诗歌大赛,邀您赴一场隆冬的诗意盛宴

2024-12-25发布于广东

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在寒风突袭的12月,一场令人心潮澎湃的英文诗歌大赛在新哲文院火热举行诗歌是心灵的声音,是情感的共鸣,在这场诗歌盛宴中,来自不同年级的参赛者们以唯美绮丽、饱含哲思的英文诗歌,展现了他们深厚的英文素养,以及对生活的独特见解和感悟。


“很高兴看到了那么多的同学们能够勇敢地表达自己的内心世界,并分享他们的故事与感受”本次活动发起人文科组组长张老师 Danny 表示,此次诗歌大赛不仅考验了学生的英语语言能力,更激发了他们的创造力与表达欲。寄语:每位学生都能在诗歌中发现美,找到慰藉,发出属于自己的声音


在中外教的严格评判下,各项奖项花落各家。最佳藏头诗Best Acrostic最佳俳句Best Haiku)最佳自由诗Best Free Verse最具创意语言Most Creative Use of Language最佳形状诗(Best Shape Poetry)以及总冠军Best overall winner等多个奖项的诞生,为这场大赛画上了圆满的句号。接下来,让我们一起欣赏获奖佳作,感受诗歌非凡魅力。


总冠军
Overall Winner

Belonging

There I was, in a dim, gloomy town on a rainy night, siting on the back of a tricycle truck. Noisy chatters of teenagers filled the air, yet in my heart was nothing but the sound of raindrops falling. Wheels rolling over the bumpy stone road synchronized with my heartbeat. Countless eyes gazing at me, I didn't dare look up. So far away from home, I couldn't wake up. I lied on my bed, eyes of emptiness. Blurry tunes of melancholy repeated in my head. I couldn't wake up.

者 / Alex Liu (H1C3)

注:总冠军外,此诗歌还荣获最佳自由诗提名与最具创意语言提名。


创作谈




It took me more than a year to have this written, yet I still cannot get over what happened back then. Its a real story, every line is real. I paid the cost of great emotional trauma for this poem.


用了一年多才写出来,到现在都和自己过不去。真实故事,每一句都是真实的。能写出来的代价是抹不去的心理创伤。


最佳藏头诗
BEST Acrostic
1

Winner

A fresh breeze brushed past me

Using drizzle disturbed the water and created ripples

Telling the news of the changing seasons

Unwind from the welting summer

Mild, magical and merciful wind calms me down

Nature fresh breathe was a thief who stole my anxiety

者 / Hailey Wang (LAP H2C1)

注:最佳藏头诗外,此诗歌还荣获最具创意语言诗歌提名。


创作谈




I think poetry is a way to express your feelings, emotions and thoughts.I wrote this poem mainly to express my love for autumn. I came up with the idea of writing this topic because some time ago, when the season changed and autumn just came, it rained a few light rains. Then I found that walking downstairs in such a season with cool breeze and a little light rain that did not have much influence on people could make me very happy, so I came up with this poem.


我认为诗歌是表情达意的一种方式。写这首诗主要是想表达自己对秋天的喜爱。想到要写这个话题的契机是前一段时间换季秋天刚刚到来的时候下了几场小雨,然后发现在这种有凉风并且稍微伴随一些对人没太大影响的小雨的季节在楼下散步能够使我非常愉悦,所以有了这首诗。


2
Honorable Mentions

HURRICANE 

Howling winds swept the earth

Unique track bring storms

Rivers swallowed all around

Rain covered up the sky

Impact is beyond imagination 

Change comes after the storm

Awaken the sleeping mind

Nothing does not begin to work

Everything is like spring, revival and recovery

者 / Marco (H2C2)


创作谈



My poem HURRICANE expresses both the horror of the hurricane and the joy of rebuilding afterward, not only referring to the destruction caused by the hurricane but also to our spirit of never giving up in the face of difficulties.


我的诗《飓风》表达了飓风带来的恐怖以及重建后的喜悦,不仅提到了飓风造成的破坏,还体现了我们在面对困难时永不放弃的精神。


Opening with wind, rain, torrent to show hurricane fury, rendering super impact, unimaginable damage as in front of you. The second half of the pen turn, write the changes after the storm, wake up the sleep, restart the vitality, meaning the plight of all things to recover, rejuvenated, full of philosophy and hope.


开篇以狂风、暴雨、洪流展现飓风狂暴,渲染超强冲击力,超乎想象的破坏力如在眼前。后半部分笔锋一转,写风暴过后的改变,唤醒沉睡、重启生机,寓意困境后万物复苏、重焕活力,富有哲理与希望。


3
Honorable Mentions

Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis

Painful,

Never stop, 

Every breath is baneful.

Unseen particle,

Microscopic,

Over the lungs, a blood's article.

Noose my Gasp, vessel plop,

Orient to my mucosa, which is atopic.

Ultrafine, they slip inside,

Let them set off a misty tide.

Terrain of ash and cinder's mix,

Reeking havoc, no way to fix.

Air fills with tears, The condiment is fear.

My voice is hoarse, it's wear and tear.

Is this the end,

Colistin depend,

Rekindling my rend,

Over pretend,

So, follow this trend,

Chaos dysphoria,

Only hypophoria,

Panic compose fantasmagoria,

Inside my body,

Cage his phantasmagoria,

Someone please get him out hurry,

Ibeg in auditoria.

Let turn back the time,

Into the place Ilived.

Cluster gathering around,

Over cross the sea.

Volcano cover with lime,

On my village that was undeprived.

Leading the sound from the ground,

Came here closely.

And ifI went back,Imight…

No, no Ican't

Over my life, there's no more bright,

Conclusively supplant my rant and pant.

Now the grits are start to erosion,

I cannot feel the cleanly oxygen, my body's made by porcelain.

Oh, what a gift,

Since that explosion, corrosion.

In my organ,Isee the rift,

So, send me to Formalin.

者 / Brad (H2C1)


创作谈




Acrostic poems have a unique structural beauty, and this structure enhances the emotional expression and depth of thought in the poem. I hope this poem provides everyone with a rich reading experience.


藏头诗有独特的结构美感,并通过结构增强了诗歌的情感表达和思想深度,希望这首诗歌带给大家丰富的阅读体验。



最佳俳句
Best Haiku
1
Winner

Night is calm and still.

Moonlight shines, quiet river.

Dreams call in the night.

者 / Fiona Huang (LAP H2C2)


创作谈




The moon is a common theme in haiku because it serves as a symbol of emotion and philosophy in both Eastern and Western cultures. This is why I wrote a poem centered around the moon.


月亮之所以成为俳句中的常见主题,是因为它在东西方文化中都是情感与哲理的载体,这是我写这首诗的原因。


2
Honorable Mentions

Glorious grass grew

Strived toward the bright blue sky

Day in and day out

者 / Hailey Wang (LAP H2C1)


创作谈




Haiku is beginner-friendly, concise, and rich in imagery, but writing a truly impressive haiku is not easy. The challenge lies in conveying deep emotions and thoughts through everyday, natural scenes. I am also a beginner and still have a long way to go.


俳句对诗歌初学者很友好,简洁、意象丰富,但是要写出令人拍案叫绝的俳句并不容易,难点在于要通过日常自然景象传达深刻的情感与思考。我也只是个新手,还要继续努力。



最佳自由诗
Best Free Verse
1
Winner

The Voice I Never Heard

Who are you ?

I asked, in my dream.

I was at the bottom of the sea.

The sea was pushing and tearing at me,

Find her…Find her…

Find who, I asked.

But no one answered.

So I keeped going,go to somewhere to find someone who I don't even know.

10 years, 20 years, or 100 years later.

I've walked through scorching deserts, waded through wild streams, and crossed primeval forests.

I've held the hot sand of the desert, felt the coldness of streams, and tasted the sweetness and bitterness of wild berries.

At last Iwent to the sea and lay down on the sand.

The sharp sand sliced through my skin.

The blood ran down and spread across the sea.

My arms were slowly rotting, my body was slowly sinking, until it was fully integrated into the earth.

Before I completely disappeared, I saw someone.

Someone who I never know.

But at the moment I saw her, I felt a sense of grievance overwhelming me.

She walked up to me and said something, with voice that I can never heard.

者 / Monica Yang (H2C4)


创作谈




In this poem, the ocean symbolizes the profound and unfathomable inner world, the desert represents solitude and desolation, and the forest stands for the unknown and primal forces.


在这首诗中,海洋象征着深不可测的内心世界,沙漠象征着孤独与荒凉,森林象征着未知与原始的力量。


2
Honorable Mentions

Echoes of Childhood

I woke up in the morning, seeing my bedroom. Open the curtains, feel the warm sunshine, like back to the childhood, the children who go out to play every day.

Get down from bed, sit in my chair, enjoy my breakfast, a bowl of porridge and a steamed bun, as if in school, the children who is afraid of being late to be criticized by the teacher.

Music was playing from a music box in the corner, and a child watched himself dance with his friends.

I threw the garbage after breakfast, looked up and saw the photos of myself, carefree with my parents at a picnic, cicada outside the window was calling, as if I had returned to the summer.

Through the window, the grass outside is very lush, full of all kinds of fiowers, as if you were in the prairie, where I once wanted to go.

In this room of memories, objects fade with time, but memories don't, just as the body disappears, the soul remains.Every object here carries a time, a precious memory for me.

者 / Spencer Jin (H2C3)


创作谈




Poetry is the language of the soul, capturing human emotions and experiences in concise and rhythmic phrases. It is a resonance across time and space, touching hearts and igniting imaginations.


诗歌是心灵的语言,它以精炼而富有节奏的词句捕捉人类的情感和经验。它是跨越时间和空间的共鸣,触动人心,激发想象。


Poems about childhood memoriesoften evoke a sense of innocence, curiosity, and carefree times. These works delicately depict pivotal moments in the journey of growth, capturing the simple yet profound moments of joy and the initial explorations and discoveries of the world. They serve not only as nostalgia for the past but also as a profound reflection on growth and the passage of time, reminding us of the enduring impact of childhood innocence and imagination on adult life.


诗歌中关于“童年回忆”的主题常常唤起纯真、好奇和无忧无虑的时光。这些作品通过细腻的笔触描绘了成长过程中的关键时刻,捕捉了那些简单而深刻的快乐瞬间,以及对世界的初次探索和发现。它们不仅是对过去的怀旧,也是对成长和时间流逝的深刻反思,提醒我们童年的纯真和想象力对成年生活的持续影响。


最佳形状诗
Best Shape Poetry
1
Winner

作者 / Nick (H2C3)

创作谈



Poetry is a way for people to express their emotions, reflecting the authors observations and thoughts.


诗歌是一种人表达情感的方式,是作者的所见所闻,所思所想。


Poetry about peopleserves as a window for readers to explore human emotions, experiences, and existence. It reveals the complexities of human nature through individual and collective voices, ranging from love and hate, hope and despair, to dreams and reality. The characters and narratives in poetry not only reflect the authors perspective but also resonate with readersinner feelings, making poetry a bridge to understanding oneself and others.


诗歌关于“人”的写作为读者提供了一个探索人类情感、经历和存在的窗口。它通过个人和集体的声音,揭示了人性的复杂性,从爱与恨、希望与绝望,到梦想与现实。诗歌中的人物形象和叙述不仅反映了作者的视角,也映射出读者内心的共鸣,使得诗歌成为理解自我和他人的桥梁。


2
Honorable Mentions

作者 / Miranda Zhang (H1C3)

创作谈




I think poetry is to record the beautiful things you find in your life in the form of words. Every time you read the text, you can recall that time, what you think at that moment, how you feel about beauty, and the pursuit of beauty. In this poem of mine, the object described is a cloud. So in the poem, I compare it to a fairy and take it for its understanding.


我认为诗歌就是将自己在生活中发现的美好的事物用文宇的形式记录下来,每每阅读那段文字时就能回想起那一天,那一刻自己的的所见所想,对美的感受对美的追求,而我的这一首诗中所描写的对象是云,炎炎夏日,一朵云虽不起眼,但足以带给人一丝清凉,所以在诗中比作仙女,感谢它的善解入意。


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