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加州文书知多少?送你一份UC官方写作指导!

2019-09-08

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申请文书犯愁的日子

简直到了食不知味夜不能寐的地步

经历过的小伙伴深谙其痛

没经历的童鞋也可以准备好

来接收学姐同情的眼神了……



文书真的那么难下手吗

答案是:真的!



梦想加州大学的你

UC文书写作又了解多少?

欣悦留学指导老师送来

官方写作指导!

快收藏学起来吧~


加州大学(University of California简称UC),除加州大学旧金山分校(UC San Francisco)以外的9所分校共用一个申请系统(UC Application)。


想申请加州大学,除了TOEFL/IELTS,SAT/ACT,AP,SAT2,GPA,高中毕业证等这些硬性条件需要满足学校要求外,还有一个很重要的部分——申请文书(Personal insight questions个性见解问题)。



就像UC官方申请指导中关于文书部分写到的:

Imagine UC was a person. If we met face-to-face, what would you want us to know about you? These personal insight questions allow you to tell us. You could write about your creative side. Your thoughts on leadership. A challenge you’ve faced. Whatever questions you answer, make sure you show us your personality—just as you would in real life.

文翻译:

想象UC是一个人。如果我们面对面,你想让我们怎样了解你? 这些个人见解问题可以让你告诉我们。

你可以写你有创造性的一面。你对领导力的看法。你经历过的挑战。无论你回答什么问题,一定要向我们展示你的个性——就像在现实生活中一样。


可以见到,招生官就是希望通过标化成绩以外的这些文书看到你的个性特质,你对世界的看法,你愿意分享给招生官的个人经历和故事,一个真实的有温度的你。

经常会有家长问到我们的导师:

孩子的文书到底需要写一些什么?

怎么去写?

加州大学文书共8题,申请人需要选择4个题目进行回答,字数限制每篇350个字内,贴心的UC在官网针对每个题目都提供了官方写作指导,今天我们就跟着UC官方一起来分析一下这些题目吧。


NO1.

Describe an example of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others, helped resolve disputes or contributed to group efforts over time.  

Things to consider:

A leadership role can mean more than just a title. It can mean being a mentor to others, acting as the person in charge of a specific task, or taking the lead role in organizing an event or project. Think about what you accomplished and what you learned from the experience. What were your responsibilities? 


Did you lead a team? How did your experience change your perspective on leading others? Did you help to resolve an important dispute at your school,church,in your community or an organization? And your leadership role doesn’t necessarily have to be limited to school activities. For example, do you help out or take care of your family?

题目翻译: 

描述一个表现了你领导力的例子,在其中你曾经积极地影响他人,帮助解决争端,或者随着时间的推移,你为团队的努力做出了贡献。 


题目解析:

一个领导角色不仅仅意味着一个头衔。它可以是别人的良师益友,可以是具体任务的负责人,也可以是组织活动或项目的领导者。想想你完成了什么,从这次经历中学到了什么。你的职责是什么?


你带领过一个团队吗?你的经历如何改变了你对领导他人的看法?你是否在学校、教会、社区或组织中帮助解决过重要的争端?你的领导角色并不一定局限于学校的活动。例如,你是帮助别人或者照顾家人的?

NO2.

Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side.  


Things to consider:

What does creativity mean to you? Do you have a creative skill that is important to you? What have you been able to do with that skill? If you used creativity to solve a problem, what was your solution? What are the steps you took to solve the problem?


How does your creativity influence your decisions inside or outside the classroom? Does your creativity relate to your major or a future career?

题目翻译:

每个人都有具有创造力的一面,它可以通过很多方式表现出来:解决问题、创新思维、艺术创作等。描述你如何表达你有创造力的一面。


题目解析:

创造力对你来说意味着什么?你是否有重要的创造性技能?你能运用那项技能做些什么?如果你曾用创造力去解决问题,你的解决方案是什么?你采取了什么步骤来解决这个问题?


你的创造力如何影响你在课堂内外的决定?你的创造力与你的专业或未来的职业有关吗?

NO3.

What would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time?  


Things to consider:

If there’s a talent or skill that you’re proud of, this is the time to share it. You don’t necessarily have to be recognized or have received awards for your talent (although if you did and you want to talk about it, feel free to do so). Why is this talent or skill meaningful to you?


Does the talent come naturally or have you worked hard to develop this skill or talent? Does your talent or skill allow you opportunities in or outside the classroom? If so, what are they and how do they fit into your schedule?


题目翻译:

你认为你最大的天赋或技能是什么?随着时间的推移,你是如何培养和展示这种才能的? 


题目解析:

如果你对自己的某项天赋或技能感到自豪,那么现在就是分享它的时候了。该技能/天赋不一定要获过奖或是被认同(当然如果有被奖励或者认同,并且你想谈论它,就尽管说吧)。为什么这个天赋或技能对你来说是有意义的?


你的技能/天赋是与生俱来的,还是通过自己的不断努力培养出来的?你的天赋或技能是否让你在课堂内外获得了什么样的机遇?如果有的话,它们是什么?它们是如何与你日常的时间安排相结合的?(比如和课业的冲突)


NO4.

Describe how you have taken advantage of a significant educational opportunity or worked to overcome an educational barrier you have faced. 


Things to consider:

An educational opportunity can be anything that has added value to your educational experience and better prepared you for college. For example, participation in an honors or academic enrichment program, or enrollment in an academy that’s geared toward an occupation or a major, or taking advanced courses that interest you — just to name a few. 


If you choose to write about educational barriers you’ve faced, how did you overcome or strive to overcome them? What personal characteristics or skills did you call on to overcome this challenge? How did overcoming this barrier help shape who are you today?


题目翻译:

描述你如何利用一个重要的教育机会,或如何努力克服你面临的学业上的困难。 


题目解析:

opportunity可以是任何对你的教育经历有价值的经历,是为你上大学做更好准备的经历。例如,参加过的一个荣誉或学术课程,一个与职业或专业相关的课程,或一些你感兴趣的预修课程——仅举几个例子。


如果你选择写你所面临过的学业上的障碍,你是如何克服或努力克服它们的?为了克服这个挑战,你运用了哪些个人能力/技能?克服这一障碍对于造就了今天的你有什么影响?


NO5.

Describe the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken to overcome this challenge. How has this challenge affected your academic achievement?


Things to consider:

A challenge could be personal, or something you have faced in your community or school. Why was the challenge significant to you? This is a good opportunity to talk about any obstacles you’ve faced and what you’ve learned from the experience. Did you have support from someone else or did you handle it alone?


If you’re currently working your way through a challenge, what are you doing now, and does that affect different aspects of your life? For example, ask yourself, “How has my life changed at home, at my school, with my friends or with my family?”


题目翻译:

描述你所面临过的最重大的挑战,以及你是如何一步一步去战胜这个挑战的。这个挑战是如何影响你的学业成绩的?


题目解析:

挑战可以是个人的,也可以是你在社区或学校里遇到的。为什么这个挑战对你来说很重要?这是一个很好的机会来谈谈你所面临的任何障碍,以及你从这次经历中学到了什么。你是否得到别人的支持还是自己一个人处理?


如果你现在正在克服一个挑战,你现在在做些什么?这会影响你生活的不同方面吗?例如,问问你自己,“我的家庭生活、学校生活、和朋友的交往或与家人之间的关系发生了什么样的变化?”


NO6.

Think about an academic subject that inspires you. Describe how you have furthered this interest inside and/or outside of the classroom. 


Things to consider:

Many students have a passion for one specific academic subject area,something that they just can’t get enough of.If that applies to you,what have you done to further that interest? Discuss how your interest in the subject developed and describe any experience you have had inside and outside the classroom—such as volunteer work, internships, employment, summer programs,participation in student organizations and/or clubs—and what you have gained from your involvement.

Has your interest in the subject influenced you in choosing a major and/or future career? Have you been able to pursue coursework at a higher level in this subject (honors, AP, IB, college or university work)? Are you inspired to pursue this subject further at UC, and how might you do that?


题目翻译:

想一个让你有启发的学术课题。描述一下你是如何在课堂内外培养这种兴趣的。


题目解析:

许多学生对某一特定的学术领域充满主动学习的热情,如果这适用于你,你做过哪些事来拓展这样的兴趣?讨论你对这门学科的兴趣是如何发展起来的,并描述你在课堂内外的任何经历——比如志愿者工作、实习、就业、暑期项目、参加学生组织和/或俱乐部——以及你从参与中学到了什么。


你对这门学科的兴趣是否影响了你选择专业和/或未来的职业?你是否能够在这门学科上取得更高的水平(荣誉、AP、IB、学院或大学活动)?你是否想在加州大学对这一方面继续追求进一步的学习,你会怎么做?


NO7.

What have you done to make your school or your community a better place?


Things to consider:

Think of community as a term that can encompass a group, team or a place — like your high school, hometown or home. You can define community as you see fit, just make sure you talk about your role in that community. Was there a problem that you wanted to fix in your community?


Why were you inspired to act? What did you learn from your effort? How did your actions benefit others, the wider community or both? Did you work alone or with others to initiate change in your community?


题目翻译:

你做了哪些努力让你的学校或社区变得更好? 


题目解析:

把社区想象成一个可以包含一个团体、团队或一个地方的名词——比如你的高中、家乡或家。你可以根据自己的想法定义社区,只要确保你谈论了你在该社区中的角色即可。你想要解决你的社区中的某个问题吗?


为什么你会被激发想要去做一些改变?你从自己的努力中学到了什么?你的行为对他人、更广泛的社区或两者都有什么好处?你是独自工作还是与他人一起在你的社区发起变革?

NO8.

Beyond what has already been shared in your application, what do you believe makes you stand out as a strong candidate for admissions to the University of California?


Things to consider:

Things to consider:  If there’s anything you want us to know about you, but didn’t find a question or place in the application to tell us, now’s your chance. What have you not shared with us that will highlight a skill, talent, challenge or opportunity that you think will help us know you better?


From your point of view, what do you feel makes you an excellent choice for UC? Don’t be afraid to brag a little.


题目翻译:

除了在你的申请表中已经被分享的内容,你认为是什么让你成为加州大学强有力的申请者?


题目解析:

如果你有什么想让我们知道的,但是没有在申请表中找到问题或地方告诉我们,那么现在就是你的机会了。哪些你没能和我们分享过的技能、才能、挑战或机遇能帮助我们更好地了解你?


从你的角度来看,你觉得是什么让你成为UC的一个很好的选择?不要害怕夸耀/吹嘘一下。

最后,附加州大学文书写作建议:

相比CA(普申网)系统650字的主文书和侧重于考核申请人对院校文化和专业意向的各院校的小文书, UC的8个文书题目更想要从多角度来了解你是什么样的人?


你的背景、个性、成就,你的思考和行动,侧重于了解个人的经历和成长。在很大程度上依赖于对生活事件、人物、地点和感受的描述,文书需要在真实事件的基础上进行具体和描述,参与的人员、你的创意提现、过程中的学习和成长?它如何改变你与其他对象或与人交往的方式?如何塑造你?如何影响你的思考和行动?


UC文书的选题方面很需要技巧,需要从全局考虑你的选题,充分思考如何用4个不同的事件或者主题凸显与众不同的自己,同时要考虑每个题目之间的关联性、递进层次,仔细梳理自己的课外活动、兴趣爱好、个性特征,全面、综合地搭建自己想要呈现给UC的形象。



今天的文书写作指导就到这里啦~


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