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录取故事 | Leon—热爱足球、热爱活动,同时也拿下了梦校offer!

2022-04-18

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Leon Lin

AIC Class of 2022

亚加达国际预科2022毕业生




多伦多大学

University of Toronto

文理学院

Arts and Science

(QS 2022世界大学排名#26)




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多伦多大学

University of Toronto

文理学院

Arts and Science

(QS 2022 世界大学排名#26)


墨尔本大学

The University of Melbourne

文学士

Bachelor of Arts

(U.S.News2022 世界大学排名#25)

(QS 2022世界大学排名#37)


曼彻斯特大学

The University of Manchester

社会学

Sociology

(QS 2022 世界大学排名#27)


悉尼大学

The University of Sydney

国际关系专业

International Relations

(QS 2022 世界大学排名#38)



昆士兰大学

The University of Queensland

心理科学学士

Psychological Science

(QS 2022 世界大学排名#47)


伯明翰大学

University of Birmingham

专业

Sociology

(QS 2022 世界大学排名#90)


西安大略大学

Western University

金融经济学

Financial Economics

(QS 2022 世界大学排名#170)



学生分享

Student's sharing


在我小学的时候,家里就有想送我出国留学的想法,但是因为种种原因,家里也担心我还无法适应,最后就没有实现。然后在初三的时候,爸爸妈妈就和我商量读国际学校,选中了IB课程的综合和全面性,他们给我报名AIC的入学考让我尝试一下,最后我通过了,所以就在这了。



When I was in primary school, my family had the idea of sending me to study abroad, but for various reasons, my family was worried that I couldn't adapt and didn't realize it in the end. Then, in the last year of my junior high school, my parents discussed with me to study in an international school and selected the comprehensive and comprehensive IB course. They signed me up for the AIC entrance examination to give it a try. Finally, I passed, and so I am here.


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AIC有很多来自世界各国的老师和学生,为学生提供了良好的语言环境;

学生人数不多,小班教学的方式能够让学生离老师更近,也更容易接受学习的内容;课外活动丰富,有足够的时间让学生参与课外活动和喜爱的体育项目。

AIC会邀请很多名校的招生办老师来面对面给学生介绍学校,包括UBC,新南威尔士和华威等名校。对我来说,我也能够更直观的了解到很多大学,在招生办老师的介绍和讲解过后,也让自己清楚更适合哪些大学,他们对我的优势。此外,AIC有专门的升学团队,每当我遇到什么问题的时候,我的升学导师Vivian Liang都会很耐心,负责的指导我完成大学的申请,也为我提供了很多相关的帮助。


AIC has many teachers and students from all over the world, providing a good language environment for students;

Small class teaching can make students closer to teachers and easier to adsorb the content of learning;

There are abundant extracurricular activities and sports, there is also enough time for me to participate in them.

AIC invites many University Admissions Officer from worldwide for students to consult face to face, including famous schools such as UBC, The University of New South Wales and The University of Warwick. For me, I can also understand many universities more intuitively. After the introduction and explanation from the councilor, I understand which universities are more suitable for me and their advantages to me. In addition, AIC has a councilor team. Whenever I have any problems, my enrollment councilor Vivian Liang will be very patient and responsible to guide me to complete my college applications, and also provide me with a lot of relevant help.


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在AIC的三年里, 我得到了英语能力的提升;学校培养我的自我管理和学习能力,遇到问题,更愿意去尝试自己解决;

尝试过很多之前没有的体验。


在学校印象最深刻的包括:

  1. 获得IB Learner Profile Award-Balanced,很荣幸取得这个奖项,因为在IB课程的理念里,不仅仅学业表现重要,同时课后积极参与不同的活动丰富课外生活也很重要。

  2. 当选Class representative成为学生会的一员,学生会是同学们和学校之间沟通的桥梁,在会议上,大家讨论学生的建议,解决学生提出的诉求。担任Class representative的这段时间里,领导力也得到一定程度的锻炼,我也参与组织了很多学校的活动,如开学的orientation等。

  3. 此外,作为校足球队的队员,多次代表AIC和其它学校进行比赛。


In the three years of AIC, I have improved my English ability; The school cultivates my self-management and learning ability. When I encounter problems, I am more willing to try to solve them by myself; I've tried many experiences I haven't had before.


The most impressive in school include:

  1. I am honored to win the IB learner profile award balanced, in the concept of IB course, not only academic performance is important, but also actively participating in different activities after class and enriching extracurricular life.

  2. To be a member of the student union, during my time as a class representative, my leadership has also been exercised to a certain extent. I have also participated in and organized many school activities, such as the orientation of the school.

  3. In addition, as a member of the school football team,I played for AIC in school tournament many times.


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梦校申请

Dream school application

我的申请的专业都是社会科学(social sciences),其中包括sociology和psychology。因为我对社会科学所研究的主题和内容感兴趣,社会是联系所有人的一个连接,一些相关的实验调查和分析也很有意思。

我申请了英国,加拿大,澳大利亚和香港的学校,因为我认为不同地方的学校有不同的侧重点和教育方式,所以根据各个学校的特点和专业排名,我结合了自己的情况和想法,选择匹配自己的大学。

我的标化考试是雅思,我建议最好在DP2之前完成标化考试,因为这个时候时间比较宽松,然后就不需要在申请大学的时候担心这个问题,包括我自己也是在DP1的时候把雅思考过了。提高分数,我不建议题海战术,虽然多刷真题是很有必要的,但是搞明白错题的类型和原因更加重要,找到适合自己的做题技巧,更加容易提高分数。也祝愿备考雅思托福的同学们考出自己的水平,取得优异的成绩。


我的文书里面有提及我在DP1和同学们合作设计的一个心理实验,研究接收信息和记忆力相关的,因为这件事和我大学申请的专业有关联,所以我在我的文书中提到这次经历并且讲述了我的收获,这个故事可以凸显我的组织能力和数据分析能力在整个实验的过程中得到提升。


My applied majors are social sciences, sociology and psychology. I am interested in the research topics and contents of the Institute of social sciences. Society is a connection connecting everyone. Some relevant experimental investigation and analysis are also very interesting.

I applied to schools in Britain, Canada, Australia and Hong Kong. Because I think schools in different places have different emphasis and education methods, I chose to match my university according to the characteristics and professional ranking of each school.

I realized I'd better complete the standardized test of IELTS before DP2, because the time is relatively loose at this time, and I do not need to worry about it when applying for University. I passed the IELTS test at DP1. To improve the score, I do not recommend the sea of questions tactics. Although it is necessary to brush more real questions, it is more important to understand the types and reasons of wrong questions, and find suitable skills to improve the score. I also wish the students who are preparing for the IELTS and TOEFL to keep a good form and achieve excellent results.

In my personal statement, I mentioned a psychological experiment designed in cooperation with my classmates in DP1 to study the relationship between receiving information and memory. This is related to the major I applied for in University, I mentioned this experience in my document and told my harvest. This story can highlight that my organizational ability and data analysis ability have improved in the whole process of the experiment.


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我的梦校是多伦多大学,当我收到多大给我发的offer的时候,我从起初的不敢相信到后来是被认可的喜悦和激动,觉得自己付出的努力是得到回报的。也希望自己最后大考可以顺利达到标准,将自己的梦想努力变成现实。

我先向老师们说声感谢,感谢她们的建议和帮助。感谢一直支持关心我的爸爸妈妈,感谢身边的好朋友们,他们也都不同程度上帮助过我很多很多,所以我的升学季总的来说还是比较顺利的,并取得理想的成果。对即将升入DP和即将开始升学季的同学们说,要一步一个脚印,该卷的时候卷,但是不鼓励熬夜内卷,该摆烂的时候摆烂,不要拖延,按照老师的安排和deadlines完成作业。祝所有IB学子都能成功上岸,一切顺利!


My dream school is the University of Toronto. When I received the offer from them, I felt that my efforts were rewarded. I also hope that I can successfully meet the standard in the final exam and make my dream come true!

I firstly want to say thank you to the teachers for their advice and help. Thank to my parents who have always supported and cared about me, and my good friends around me. They have helped me a lot to varying degrees, which made my college entrance season generally and relatively smooth with achieved ideal results. I would like to say to the students who are about to enter DP, we should take it step-by-step, when the volume is due, we should roll it, but we are not encouraged to stay up late and roll it when it is due, do complete the homework according to the teacher's arrangement and deadlines. I wish all IB students will go ashore successfully and to the best of all!


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家长分享

From Leon‘s parents

孩子在AIC的三年是他成长最快的三年。IB体系特别注重个人的主观能动性,激发学生的积极性,培养学生的自我能力和社会责任感。

从父母的角度,我们觉得Leon更加阳光了,思想上也更成熟了。这样他能很顺畅地进入到大学的学习生活。在DP1的时候,孩子考雅思前的那几个月,时间管理方面做得很不错,在兼顾校内功课的同时备考雅思,他付出了很多努力,考了两次,最终考到了一个理想的成绩。

 这三年,我作为家长很感谢AIC的所有老师(包括已离开AIC的老师们),老师们对待学生在学习上是师长,在生活上是家长,在思想交流上是朋友。

 最后,祝愿AIC的学子们学业有成,鹏程万里!祝愿老师们平安顺利!祝愿AICIB越来越好!



My child’s study in AIC is his fastest growing three years. IB system pays special attention to individual subjective initiative, stimulates students' enthusiasm, and cultivates students' self-ability and sense of social responsibility.

From the perspective of parents, we think Leon has become more “sunny” and mature in thought. With this way of thinking, he can smoothly enter the study and life of the University. In DP1, the child did a good job in time management in the months before the IELTS test. While taking into account the school homework, he made a lot of efforts to prepare for the IELTS test. He took the test twice and finally got an ideal result.

In the past three years, as a parent, I am very grateful to all teachers of AIC (including those who have left AIC). Teachers play as teachers to students in learning while they play as parents in life and as friends in ideological exchange.

Finally, I wish AIC students success in their studies and a bright future! Wish all the teachers peace and success! Wish AICIB better every year!




升学老师分享

From Leon‘s counselors

升学老师 Vivian Liang


第一次见到Leon,这个乐观积极的大男孩给我留下了很深刻的印象。5月考出雅思,11月文书定稿并递交多大和香港的申请,12月递交英国的申请,1月递交澳洲和加拿大的申请......在整个申请过程中,Leon踏实走好申请的每一步,规划好时间,并以平常心等待录取结果。最后的申请结果证明,一切的努力都是值得的,他最终以低于学校录取要求的分数,成功斩获多伦多大学和曼彻斯特大学的录取。


When I first met Leon, I was deeply impressed by this optimistic and positive boy. After Leon got his IELTS test results in May, he finalized his decision in November and submitted the application of University of Toronto and University of Hong kong, and in December, he submitted the application of the UK, he also submitted the application for universities in Australia and Canada in January. Throughout the application process, Leon took every step carefully, planned the time, waited for the admission results with an ordinary heart. A remarkable result proved that all the efforts were worthwhile, he finally won the admission of the University of Toronto and The University of Manchester with scores lower than the admission requirements of the school.


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在专业选择方面,Leon一开始在犹豫要申请社会学还是心理学,在跟他沟通文书的过程中,我发现他的活动更加偏向社会学,对社会学也有一些自己独特的看法,最终Leon听取我的建议选定了社会学。文书以“小时候I often fantasize about myself as a superman, able to eliminate the bullies and help the down-trodden....”作为开头,阐述一个孩童的异想天开,由此一步步展开他为了实现这个”梦“做出的努力、遇到的挫折、并一次次克服困难重新出发。相信通过一个普通孩子的天真想法,可以引发招生官的共鸣!

 


Leon was hesitant about applying for sociology or psychology at the beginning. After communicating with him, I found that his activities were more biased towards sociology and had some unique views to it. Finally, Leon listened to my suggestions and chose sociology. I often fantasize about myself as a superman, being able to eliminate the bullies and help the down trodden As in the beginning, it describes a child's whimsical, and then unfolds step by step his efforts, setbacks and difficulties to realize this "dream". I believe that the naive idea of an ordinary child can arouse the resonance of the admissions officer!


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在整个申请过程中,申请任务重、压力大,因此,时间规划非常重要。由于前期充分的申请准备,Leon几乎每所大学都在早申请阶段早早递交上去,避开竞争激烈的常规申请轮次,这是他逆袭被梦校录取的重要原因之一。梦是一种欲望,想是一种行动,梦想是梦与想的结晶。Leon已经实现了梦想的第一步,也希望他在大学继续保持初心,学有所成!


In the whole application process, the application task is heavy and the pressure is great. Therefore, time planning is very important. Due to the sufficient application preparation in the early stage, almost every university of Leon submitted early in the early application stage to avoid the routine application rounds with fierce competition, which is one of the important reasons why he was admitted to the dream school. Dream is a desire, thought is an action, and dream is the crystallization of dream and thought. Leon has realized the first step of his dream and hopes that he will continue to maintain his original intention and achieve success in his studies in University!


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